
The two pieces we read this week from our anthology, “The Police Band” by Donald Barthelme and “Che’s Last Letter” by Abbie Hoffman, were interesting in their portrayal of the creative techniques different people were using in trying to influence others to direct action. Barthelme himself put it succinctly when he said that “however much the writer might want to be straightforward, these virtues are no longer available to him. He [the writer] discovers that in being simple, honest, [and] straightforward, nothing much happens.” Barthelme and Hoffman each devised very distinct yet equally imaginative ways of circumventing straightforward appeals to the masses and delivering their messages in more subtle forms.
That said, I must admit that I don’t truly understand Barthelme’s point in his short story, “The Police Band.” The story itself is humorous and enjoyable, but I simply don’t get what exactly he is trying to satire. This is most likely due to my own lack of knowledge about the era—I don’t know if the police really did try outrageous stunts and off the wall ideas along the lines of that described in the story (in which case, Barthelme was mocking them), or if he was suggesting that the police should be more liberal and open-minded to new ideas and more peaceful strategies (in which case, Barthelme was condemning them). I can see the irony either way; I just don’t know which one was meant!
Hoffman’s letter, on the other hand, was perfectly clear. By impersonating the already respected revolutionary figure of Che Guevara, Hoffman hoped to inspire in his readers a gripping passion for the cause of freedom. Here, Hoffman assumes (correctly or not) that being direct would not achieve his desired results. From the beginning of his letter, he relies heavily upon the rhetorical use of pathos, trying to relate Che to the U.S. youth he is addressing. This is particularly apparent in lines such as, “We are somewhere in the jungles of Bolivia … struggling against immense odds. My thoughts turn to the young people struggling for a chance at life in the bowels of plastic America cut off from the lifeline of human existence.” Hoffman also relies upon metaphor, as in, “Surely the destiny of man was to lift himself out of the jungle,” where he creates a new metaphor to relate Che’s supposed situation to that of the U.S. counterculture. These strategies seem like they would be quite effective.
Abbie Hoffman himself is an interesting persona of the ’60s. He has a history of “creative” approaches to influencing others, as this letter is not the first instance of Hoffman’s readiness to deceive in order to attain his goals. As we read in our other textbook, Hoffman (as part of the Youth International Party) purposely attempted to incite riots at the Democratic Party Convention in Chicago—only admitting so after being acquitted of the charges, of course. He succeeded in his plans there… I wonder if anyone at the time really believed that his letter was written by Che?










